I regularly meet with another writer at our local café. Either we spy someone or we take a sentence from a book and then write for ten minute. What we get are flash fiction pieces (up to and around 750 words) and stimulation to go home and write on the longer pieces we are working on.
For The Living Room the first sentence is from Trouble in the
Village by Rebecca Shaw. My writing pal went to the wonderful, gigantic vide
grenier (flea market) held each May 1 in Argelès and bought a number of English
books from the cat lady including this one. The money goes to help the stray cat population.
Sheila
took a brisk look around the sitting room. She did every time she walked into
the room, to make sure everything was in place. This was the one place in the
house that was off limits to the children. No plastic soldiers, no Barbie
dresses were allowed. The kids could come in and sit and read as long as they
took their books with them.
“Mummy’s room,” 13-year-old Angela would say to her friends and roll her eyes. As for the other two younger kids, they just accepted the rule, but Angela would complain and complain that the house was for everyone.
“I pay
the mortgage,” her mother would say and I have the right to decide to what do
with the rooms. You’re lucky I allow you to do what you want in the pig sty of
your own room.”
Something
was different, but she wasn’t sure what. Each night when all the kids were in
bed, Sheila would pour herself a glass of wine, take a book from the shelves,
one with no literary merit and have nothing to do with the legal profession
that kept her occupied during the day, and listen to the calm.
Sometimes
she’d fall asleep, but usually she’d get a chapter read before she went to her
own room. She would joke she could fall asleep before her head touched the
pillow.
She wasn’t
unhappy with her life. Being a widow was fine. Her husband had been a
womanizer, although only she had known that. She had acted out the proper
degree of sadness at his funeral and then went onto a happier life. Her career
as a small town lawyer earned her enough money and left her enough time to
supervise the kids through the chaos of each day.
However,
in the last six months every time she came into the room, something was out of
place: a figurine moved three inches to the right, a pillow from the couch put
on the chair. She knew it was Angela.
So what
was it tonight?
She set
her wine glass down on the coaster on the end table to the right of the couch.
That was it, the coaster wasn’t there, it was on the end table to the left of
the couch.
She moved it back and was curious what would happen tomorrow, but not so curious she wouldn't get a good night's sleep.
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