This week's Free Write still has three writers in two different countries. Rick's prompt was a photo was taken in our small French village, but the country isn't important. It is the chance to poke one's creativity encouraging it to slip into other aspect of our creative lives. Anyone reading this might want to try a Free Write. If you want to share it, please do.
Rick's Free Write
Empty chairs, empty tables.
Reminds me of a Les Miserables song after so many young men had died in a failed revolution.
But these are peaceful empty. A Sunday afternoon in a quiet village in the south of France. Normal. Tranquil.
The next morning these chairs will be filled with people talking, sharing their lives over café, thé and chocolat chaud. If the wind is down and the sun is out, the umbrellas will be up.
Sundays are my favorite in the village. Fewer people, fewer cars. Mostly dog walkers. Maybe kids playing football on the church plaza (unaware it used to be a graveyard).
Sunday afternoon used to be the time we caught up on news from our birth country through the talk shows. But they have become nauseating since the election as we witness the country’s accelerating destruction.
We think we are ‘safe’ in our little out-of-the-way enclave. But are we? Will there be war in Europe? Will the forces of evil stimulate civil unrest that reaches even us?
It would be wonderful to imagine we are immune, living in a bubble of the past, carefree… but is there any such place on the earth anymore?
Will these tables fill with happy people again? Or will they remain empty through intimidation and fear?
Rick Adams is an aviation journalist and publisher of www.aviationvoices.com
D-L's Free Write
Toni walked by the tea room's outdoor chairs and tables. The sun was bright. No one was sitting there. The tramontane was blowing at full force sending leaves racing down the street.
It had been five years since she been there. She and Paul had had coffees after their divorce hearing.
It had been a friendly divorce, if such a thing was possible. She and Paul had thought they'd found their life's partners in each other. The problem was they wanted different lives.
Paul loved his florist shop, owned first by his grandparents and parents. It was part of village life. Toni found herself sneezing when she was near many of the flowers.
She wanted to be a game develop and when she had a chance to work with two friends from her tech school, she couldn't pass it up,
Unfortunately the job required a move to Paris, or made not unfortunately because she loved Paris.
Today, she had not planned to get off the Paris-Barcelona train where she'd left her marriage. Something seemed to propel her when the train stopped at the station.
In the last five years some stores had changed. Some were the same. So many espressos had been shared by her and Paul while sitting on those chairs as they people watched.
She peeked inside. She saw the back of Paul's head. He was holding the hand of a very pretty woman as he used to hold hers.
On the way back to the train station she felt sad at what wasn't yet happy they'd made the right decision.
D-L has had 17 fiction and non fiction books published. Check out her website at:. https://dlnelsonwriter.com
Julia's Free Write
It was a beautiful sunny day.
The terrace lay waiting, every chair and every table still empty.
Who would come to sit and enjoy a coffee or tea?
Who a snack and a glass of wine?
Who perhaps a full meal?
It looked to be a great place also for people watching – a small Pedestrian zone.
Oh, here comes the first client of the day: the chap in somber clothing, always with a hat on his head, never a smile for either
The waitress nor the waiter – and just barely a word either, simply the strict minimum: “a glass of white wine, a Chablis, please”.
He is soon followed by the second – a woman in her 50ies, wearing a lovely spring dress, the appropriate handbag, shoes and jewelry,
In truth a bit fancy for this part of town. She orders “a small glass of red wine, the pinot please. And settles in to await a friend.
Her friend duly arrives – an indeterminate 40-something, dressed in very casual slacks, but a nice blouse. She turns out to be a teetotaler so orders only a coffee.
Then comes the young couple, so much in love
that they
have only eyes for each other. They order a sandwich
(after
consulting their change) and a soda.
The family is next: loud, boisterous – they order a small meal.
And so it goes until the lonely terrace is full of various individuals
All enjoying their time in the sun in this small town in Southern France.
Julia has written and taken photos and loves syncing up with friends. Her blog can be found: https://viewsfromeverywhere.blogspot.com/
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