Sunday, March 01, 2026

Lexington: Anatomy of a Novel 1&2

Here are the first two chapters of Lexington: Anatomy of a Novel. Chapters will be published daily. The first two chapters are the story behind the story. 

To Jim Hollister and all the Park Rangers who make history come alive.  

Chapter 1

Lexington, Massachusetts

September 2017

 

 THE SEPTEMBER DAY was sweater-wearing cool when we arrived at the Minute Man National Park parking lot in Lexington, Massachusetts. The trees, dressed in red and yellow, held on to most of their leaves. A few had drifted to the ground making tiny patterns of color, reminding me of my childhood autumns.

My husband Rick and I had travelled from Europe where we live part time in Southern France and part time in Geneva, Switzerland.

Despite being senior citizens, we’re relatively new newlyweds. This was our memory tour. He had shown me where he had grown up in upstate New York. It was my turn to show him my childhood Boston and its surrounding area. I wanted him to see the battlefield where the first battle of the American Revolution had been fought.

Bruce Davidson, an artist friend living nearby, joined us. He was a second-generation friend. His father and I had been lunch buddies for years. My love for Bruce only grew that night in Geneva when he called to tell me his dad had died.

At the end of the call, I said, “I’m sorry you lost your dad.” His reply was, “I’m sorry you lost your friend.” His empathy when he was suffering reaffirmed what a kind man he is. Time with Bruce, whether in France or New England, is always a gift.

A tour bus pulled in and spit out a flock of men and woman in our age group. One woman looked at the green grass through the battlefield leading to the Visitor’s Center and said in a strong southern accent, “I’m not walking that. There’s nothing to see.” I wanted to tell her, “This is where men died so you could have your American country,” but I didn’t.

Like other battlefields I’ve visited, including Bull Run and Normandy Beach, Lexington, is peaceful now. The horror of what happened 245 years before has disappeared. To me, the ghosts of those who sacrificed their lives for a cause are still present. There’s everything to see: peace at a price.

Rick, Bruce and I walked toward the battlefield. I’d been there several times. When I lived in the area it was a good place to take visiting friends.


As always, I stopped at the gravestone of two unknown British soldiers. As always it bothered me. I wondered who they were. Why had they joined the British army? Did their families, if they had any in Britain, know they had died? What was their life like in the army? Were they really devoted to their King?

I’d done half-hearted research to find out more about these unknown men thinking maybe I could create a novel about them. It had never passed the thinking stage.

I had learned the general history of the founding of the United States in school from the American point of view. At university, in an English history class with Professor Peter Blewett, a British native, I was given the other side. It was an awakening. However, his two lectures on the subject several decades ago were not enough to create a novel.


Chapter 2

Geneva, Switzerland

September

 

 BACK IN SWITZERLAND, I decided not to put off writing a novel about an unknown British soldier who died in that first battle any longer. He would be fictious out of necessity. The events would be accurate.

Time to start research using blogs, internet, websites, books and podcasts. I would need to reach out to historians to help me create characters and situations within the context of reality.

September always seemed to be more of the start of a new year than January 1st. Probably all those years beginning school, my daughter doing the same in September. When I worked corporate the best time for launching something new was when people were back from summer holidays.

When I first moved to Switzerland, everyone told me how beautiful the autumns were. September arrived and the leaves turned — to yellow not red. Pretty yes, but a letdown in comparison to New England’s vivid reds.

Living in Switzerland is like living in a postcard. When we leave our Geneva studio, we see the Jura mountains. Turn around, the Alps are visible. It’s a five-minute meander to Lac Léman. The lake’s colors can be anything from a light to navy blue to green. If the Bise blows, the high waves churn the water to a surly brown.

Autumn wasn’t totally a new writing start. I was doing a final polish of Day Care Moms, strengthening my verbs, doing a global search for ‘ly’ to eliminate as many adverbs as possible, rearranging paragraphs and checking for continuity. When one spends a year plus on a book, it is possible to have a person that was six feet four in chapter two shrink to five foot nine in chapter 48.

My Day Care Mom characters Ashley, Sally, Brenda, Sally-Marie and Maura were packing their bags and moving out of my brain where they had lived for the past 16 months. They were being replaced by one of the two unknown British soldiers under that gravestone in Lexington. For some reason that I don’t understand, I only wanted to feature one. The idea of creating a plausible life for a British soldier that would be killed at Lexington grew into an obsession.

My knowledge of early American history was rusty. When I was researching Murder in Caleb’s Landing, I had bought The Complete Works of the Mayflower Pilgrims by Caleb Johnson, which included every document from the early colonists. The book is almost three inches thick.

Reviewing it for information for my potential novel revealed two major problems. My novel was to be from the point of view of the British not Americans; the British wanted to suppress the uprising. The second was that the documentation in Johnson’s book stopped long before the Revolution.

I e-mailed Minute Man National Park asking about the British soldiers who had died. Within a day, Ranger Jim Hollister wrote back saying that they didn’t know. He told me that each year the British Consul General based in Boston laid flowers at the gravestone. That so fascinated me, it triggered a second plot for the novel, a modern aspect. Little did I know how Ranger Jim and I would send lots of e-mails back and forth. I would see him in videos that would provide so many details that I wanted to hug him, which between distance and a pandemic was impossible.

He told me about a blog by J.J. Bell, www.boston1775.blogspot.com, with so much information about what Boston was like prior to the start of hostilities I felt as if I were living there. It was then I made a commitment to write the novel not just think about it.

Unlike my other novels, when I had a good idea of the plot before I started, there was still so much I didn’t know. I wanted to be as historically accurate as possible without losing the tension. I joked to my husband I couldn’t have General Gage, Governor of Massachusetts in 1775, communicate with his London superiors via the internet. I could, however, make sure he responded in the novel to the communiques he received via a slow ship.

I needed to create a British soldier.

I am a restless sleeper and often wake around two in the morning and stay awake for a couple of hours. Often my best ideas come at that time. I don’t need a notebook to jot them down. Even if I did, I might have trouble reading my writing.

A woman kept jumping into my head. It was as if she were sitting on my bed saying, “Use me, use me.” She wouldn’t go away. My Third Culture Kid novels combine the past and present, but I wasn’t planning to do this for Lexington. I gave up and invited her in.

I named her Daphne after a British friend whom I’d been e-mailing before going to sleep. Maybe I could play with the Daphne character while I was trying to find my British soldier and doing my research. I wanted to align the character with the past but had no idea how to do it.

I did know she needed to be British. I decided to make her a new arrival to Boston as the wife of the British Consul General. She would be a newlywed.

I tried to contact the British Consulate in Boston. They did not respond to e-mails and their phone system was one with multiple numbers to choose from, and as I worked my way through the menu I was timed out. Good thing my international calls are part of my telecom package. Google images were a limited help.

I decided to write around what I didn’t know, and have the British Consul General in Boston housed temporarily on Commonwealth Avenue because of repairs to the normal house used by the embassy.


To be continued tomorrow.