On 11/11 the Flash Fiction assignment is to write a complete story in 11 sentences with a bonus for having each sentence 11 words. Probably as close as I'll ever get to a prose haiku. Tomorrow a new prompt, a new challenge.
I can’t go and I won’t go, I told my mother.
She sighed the long sigh I knew all too very well.
She and I had had this stupid fight for nine days.
I did not care if it was Uncle Chuck’s birthday party.
All my aunts and uncles would be there with their smiles.
Fake smiles and I wondered how many of them really knew.
I suppose it didn’t matter who knew and who did not.
Would I know, if I looked deeply into the aunts’ eyes.
None of them ever said anything to me about Uncle Chuck.
I never said anything to them, although I wish I had.
Finally, I would tell my mother so she would understand.
1 comment:
What a great opening teaser! I want to know more. I'm ready to dive into the book!
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